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There are 2 main things that I see right away. The tail is kind of spread out near its base, and the pose of the phoenix is awkward. It looks like it's about to do a backflip, which is fine, but it doesn't have the majesty and pride that are associated with phoenixes. Very well folded, though-good job with the wing structure. Oh, and one last small thing-the claws should be 3 in front and one in back, not all 4 in front.
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I get what you mean, but the type of paper is really bad, and I can't get good paper lately, It is like trying to fold something with a napkin..
EDIT
Just like you advised Jon, I reshaped the tail, bent back the claw of the phoenix, and tried to improve the pose of the phoenix. The only thing I am dissapointed about are the wings and shoulder. In the video of Kamiya and his phoenix, the wings raise up high above its neck, and spreads out beautifully, but my wings look as if they are about to flap..
EDIT
Just like you advised Jon, I reshaped the tail, bent back the claw of the phoenix, and tried to improve the pose of the phoenix. The only thing I am dissapointed about are the wings and shoulder. In the video of Kamiya and his phoenix, the wings raise up high above its neck, and spreads out beautifully, but my wings look as if they are about to flap..
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If practice doesn't make perfect, at least it passes time! ^_^
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Very cool, it looks much better. I know what you mean about paper-I have folded with foil all my life and I am at a point where its shortcomings are really holding me back. I am living in a college dorm, too, so I don't really have the space to make tissue foil/backcoated paper. I am going to try to catch up over the summer.
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I am pretty sure it is mullberry paper, it has the white cotton stuff in it as well as texture. Here is my third, and probablly last attemp of folding Phoenix 3.5. I know I have been folding phoenixes too much lately, so this will probably be the last time folding Phoenix 3.5 for the while. This one is by far the best phoenix I have made, and a tried to make it as good as Kamiya's Phoenix, and it turned out pretty good!
Kevin Luo
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If practice doesn't make perfect, at least it passes time! ^_^
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Hi! To some users and origami friends of mine, I want to let you know I wont be on the forum for a week and 4 days because I am finally visiting China! I will miss this place and all of you origamists, but I will continue to fold origami in China and bring back any cool things I learned in CHina!
Kevin Luo
If practice doesn't make perfect, at least it passes time! ^_^
If practice doesn't make perfect, at least it passes time! ^_^
Have fun Kevin, and show us the photos when you are back!
My flickr album: http://www.flickr.com/photos/12043525@N04/
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Hey, take your vacations. Dont worry for the forum. It will remain here until you return.
Have a nice time Kevin!!!
Have a nice time Kevin!!!
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