Hey guys
Check out my latest design: Swan
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=8 ... =501950326
It is from a border grafted bird base. I want to run it through you guys to see if this is original enough.... don't know if other people have similiar design like this....
Thanks
Alex
Gallery of Suntailhawk
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Nice swan, but I think the recognition problem is the pose.
I've included some pictures to show what I mean.
The first picture is a photo that approximates your model; your model is a fairly good fit, but most people don't see standing swans. Instead, they see swans sitting in the water.
The distinguishing feature is the graceful S-shaped neck. The high wings on the side, also add to the distinctiveness. But, my simple suggestion is to make the neck a little more S-shaped.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... gs.arp.jpg
http://029d6c2.netsolhost.com/images/Bl ... Revise.gif
http://www.tapirback.com/tapirgal/gifts ... d-f506.jpg
- Hank Simon
I've included some pictures to show what I mean.
The first picture is a photo that approximates your model; your model is a fairly good fit, but most people don't see standing swans. Instead, they see swans sitting in the water.
The distinguishing feature is the graceful S-shaped neck. The high wings on the side, also add to the distinctiveness. But, my simple suggestion is to make the neck a little more S-shaped.
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... gs.arp.jpg
http://029d6c2.netsolhost.com/images/Bl ... Revise.gif
http://www.tapirback.com/tapirgal/gifts ... d-f506.jpg
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Re: Gallery of Suntailhawk
It's been a while, but here is my latest design:
$ sunflower
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid= ... 32771b34b1
$ Rose
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid= ... 421d63dcd7
It was done for a customer... But I want to post it here to claim ownership in case he doesn't give me the creamy
$ sunflower
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid= ... 32771b34b1
$ Rose
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid= ... 421d63dcd7
It was done for a customer... But I want to post it here to claim ownership in case he doesn't give me the creamy