Gallery of Suntailhawk

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suntailhawk
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Gallery of Suntailhawk

Post by suntailhawk »

Hey guys

Check out my latest design: Swan

http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=8 ... =501950326


It is from a border grafted bird base. I want to run it through you guys to see if this is original enough.... don't know if other people have similiar design like this....

Thanks
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Post by darkeagle »

very good!!!!!!
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Post by Ragnorax »

oh you did a very nice job :wink:
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Post by HankSimon »

Nice swan, but I think the recognition problem is the pose.

I've included some pictures to show what I mean.

The first picture is a photo that approximates your model; your model is a fairly good fit, but most people don't see standing swans. Instead, they see swans sitting in the water.

The distinguishing feature is the graceful S-shaped neck. The high wings on the side, also add to the distinctiveness. But, my simple suggestion is to make the neck a little more S-shaped.

http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/c ... gs.arp.jpg

http://029d6c2.netsolhost.com/images/Bl ... Revise.gif

http://www.tapirback.com/tapirgal/gifts ... d-f506.jpg

- Hank Simon
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Post by legionzilla »

Very good!!!
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Post by FrumiousBandersnatch »

Excellent wings! I do have to agree that some neck adjustments could help. The final shaping just seems like it is an odd pose for a swan? That might be part of your recognition issues...
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Post by elanman »

The wings look brilliant, very clean, flowing and neat. I also like the captured stance, although I do not think that's entirely realistic.

Overall, very intuitive model, especially from a traditional base.
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Re: Gallery of Suntailhawk

Post by suntailhawk »

It's been a while, but here is my latest design:

$ sunflower
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid= ... 32771b34b1

$ Rose
http://www.facebook.com/photo.php?fbid= ... 421d63dcd7

It was done for a customer... But I want to post it here to claim ownership in case he doesn't give me the creamy :P
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