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good!
your design?
one square?

Thanks !! I am so hungry for feedback. My design. But Im not so satisfied. Two squares, the white one and the black one.

Crumple folded?

Ye crumple folded.

What is that tentacle thing sticking out of the back of the kid's head? Some kind of hair thing?

The kid looks only vaguely humanoid, it needs more features IMO, especially the face/head.

The jellyfish looks great, though. I like the idea of a kid sitting on a giant jellyfish...just floating around...

This would be a great m0del to hang from the ceiling.

Why do you have a kid on a jellyfish in your bathroom?

The shaping on the kid looks nice, but that's a mighty long squid-like pony tail...

Hehe. It is in my bathroom because it need to get dry. And the pony tail is the tail of the hood.
Thanks for the feedbacks ! And about the kid ! I knooow.

Don't change the kid too much-the styles of the kid and the jellyfish mesh very well together. I think the kid's bulbous head and stylized, simplistic features help.

Try inverting the colors =]! I think it would be great...

Thaanks Jonnycakes ! I was wandering if i should give the kids arms with fingers and a better face and changes the head/hood. But I made him simpel and stylistic for a reason. if I made him without the jelly it would be a totally different kid! But what would y o u do - Think its good or uncomplete? Thanks again !!
Galif: What do you meen inverting? My english aint the best - but I tought inverting is like the photo effect (the black becomes white and the white becomes black) . . .

I meant reversing xD... too bad, forgot the proper english word =P!

Just like that: make the jellyfish white and the kid, black. It could look like a cloak, dunno...

ye - Its true ! Think it would look nice, reversing. I will really try that ! Thanks.

The only thing that is a bit confusing about it is the back of the kid's hood-to be frank, it doesn't look too much like the back of a hood. If you could widen it, it would look great. You could also turn it into another feature like hair or something. Whatever you do (change it, refold it, leave it how it is), you have some good designs and an even better style. Keep it up

Thanks alot !! And I will work . . . and get better. Have alots of ideas. Actually. . . - This is my first design. Merry Christmas !
Alaine