The Origami Forum

Hi

Please can you check out my YouTube channel:

https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCX4O_0 ... g/featured

Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks

If you haven't already or didn't know, you'll need designers' permission before uploading instructions to their models. Just a tip in case you do that. (:

OK Duncan, I checked out the video for the circular winged paper plane and for the origami crane. The videos are pretty good. Very easy to understand and the written instructions are quite clear. I was surprised with how easy it was to fold that plane! I really do suggest that you include a demostration of this action models once you fold them. For example, at the end of the video you should throw the paper plane and record how it glides. I think that would help a lot.

About the origami crane, actually that isn't the traditional crane. That's really the flapping bird. If you hold the bottom of the wings and pull the tail it will flap its wings. Did you know that? It would've been cool if you had shown that at the end of the video. The crane looks a bit like the flapping bird but it's neck and tail are thinner and the wings have the shape of spear heads. Know what I mean'? I'd suggest correcting the name in the video.

Well, that's what I had to say. Hope it helps .

Your videos are great and clear! But I think that you should put more tutorials that are more complex than the ones that you already have, because I think that you are perfectly capable of doing it.